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Thursday, 17 November 2011

A Misty Morning - An Interpretation by Jean Marco


Mouth breathes as a child's exhalation
Colliding inside the window to the world
It's expected to go, to dissipate, to show
It stays and distorts your view


Hand wipes in an attempt to see
Smearing then clearing this see-through canvas
It's supposed to portray, to relay state of play
Yet the vapour remains clouding your view


Eye looks out through the morning mist
With difficulty finding shape and form
It cannot define or refine, nor underline
The mist makes it hard to see


Body shivers as it enters the mist
Taking comfort in the protection upon it
The day has begun, the mist soon will be gone
To return another day or morning

Jean Marco « j'ai marqué »
Interpretation: A Misty Morning

1 comment:

  1. Wow you actually made me shiver. Very powerful imagery. Thank you very much for your contribution!! Also welcome back
    Gio

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