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Monday, 25 January 2010

Suddenly New Obviously Wonderful - Gio

Automatically I reach for the dial to re-tune my set
Bedazzled, reality strikes in sudden terms. An earth unkempt!
Did my slumber bring the onset of an earth gone cold?
Am I witnessing the ground reaching for covering like times of old?

Tempest, maelstrom, confusion, delusion
Beautiful, annoyance, bringer of joy, disruptive

This beautiful tempest unwaveringly requests entry to fill
Likened to a faulty continuum causing space and time to stand still
But the maelstrom brings a fluidity like that of time, yet covers
Only staying a brief while then vanishing to frequent others

The power can be unbelievably strong,
Its grip possibly immeasurable,
It may be likened to the battle in the way it cause panic
And still be like an elixir of life, making youthful those who are manic

Legendary and wild it cannot be tamed why bother?
As unpredictable and potent as its mother!
Enjoy it while it stays such a short while still,
Then wait another year for it to softly land on your window sill.


1 comment:

  1. *Spoiler Alert*

    Some people found this too ambiguous.

    *Spoiler Alert*

    So basically its to do with the snow hence the first letter of each word in the title.

    "Automatically I reach for the dial to re-tune my set" - Tv's used to display white noise or snow when not tuned in properely.

    "Am I witnessing the ground reaching for covering like times of old?" The earth has asked the sky for a "blanket" of snow

    "Tempest, maelstrom, confusion, delusion
    Beautiful, annoyance, bringer of joy, disruptive" - First line synonymous, second perceptive

    "Likened to a faulty continuum causing space and time to stand still" - How snow can bring london to a stand still lol

    "And still be like an elixir of life, making youthful those who are manic" - The snow makes everybody act like children its great that way ;)

    "As unpredictable and potent as its mother!" - Mother Nature

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